Kylie Kohut
November 18,2015
Professor Young
Problem/solution essay
1. Because ITP and Evans Syndrome are rare diseases many people do not know what these diseases are. Therefore there not as many foundations helping the victims of the diseases or any cures for the diseases.
2. Therefore there are not as many foundations helping the people with Evans Syndrome and ITP, or any cures for these diseases, because they are so rare.
Kylie. Thank you for writing your thesis.
ReplyDeleteWhere in your emerging thesis have you written the "should" statement? What are you saying *should* happen as it relates to ITP and Evans Syndrome?